We are at St. Kilda beach on the sand. Her name is Jean Mary, she looks like a nice person. She looks happy and soaking up the sun doing exercises
She comes from Yorkshire.
“Jean Mary works in a shop” said Ivy. She is relieved she’s out of the shop and soaking up the sun. She’s very happy in love maybe she looks like she’s a girlfriend. She doesn't have any kids.
There are lots of people in the background. There are children building sandcastles. And you can hear the waves and noises from people
You can smell the salt water.
God knows what she’ll do next! Exclaimed Tricia
She’ll probably go for a swim but maybe not in that costume. Jean Mary is shouting “Cooee”
Looks like some holiday flats in the background, maybe she’s staying there. She’s shouting “Come and make sandcastles” She’s waving to her friends to join her. Everyone seems happy said Thelma.
Jean Mary is eating lollies on the beach and ice cream. She loves dancing, dancing on the beach
She’s dancing and shouting “I’ll have some of that”
Mum and Dad are going to give her a cup of tea
Afterwards she goes home and gets tea for mother
And maybe some fish and chips, if the seagulls don’t come and pinch some.
Written by Beverley, Mary, Ivy Liz, Pearl, Lois, Thelma and Patricia