Her name is Hannah.
She’s escaped from the car park. She’s escaped from what she didn’t like.
Her brothers were chasing her.
She’s got four brothers – they are sixteen and in their mid-20s. They are called Tom, John, Paul and Ringo.
Hannah’s 18. She’s a mannequin.
She lives with her mum, Dad and her brothers.
She’s running to the police station to tell them about her brothers.
Hannah was concerned about being beaten up by her brothers. They’ve beaten her up before.
They are bringing a bad name to her family.
There is no on around. ‘Where has everyone gone?’ she is saying to herself.
She can hear her brothers running after her.
Her brothers catch her. They give her a telling off (which is a fancy way of saying they knock the shite out of her).
When she gets home her parents shout at her brothers.
The brothers are going to make sure Hannah doesn’t bring the family into disrepute.
By Queenie and Peter