Something’s got his attention because he’s got his tongue out to the side. The man looks like a Kevin or maybe it’s the boy who’s Kevin. No the little boy’s name is Johnny, that’s a nice name for a boy.
There’s women in the background with straw hats. I’d like to know where they are, is it a park?
“They could be in the park.” Mary
He still has his tongue out and he’s got something in his hand. It looks like a chocolate bar,
“It could be a chocolate bar.” Harriet
They look happy but I don’t think they have a family. It’s rainy, but there are flowers on the trees. It looks cold because they are wearing sweaters. It looks like someone’s birthday, it could be the boy’s birthday. He looks like a 10 or 11 year old.
“It’s not a easy job writing a story.”
They are going to eat cake and ice cream. Not sure what they will drink, maybe lemonade or orangeade.
After ice cream and drinks they will go for a walk in the beautiful park. They will be very happy. They are very happy!
By: Harriet, Doris, Georgina, Elsie, Gaye, Cecile, Joan, Mary F.